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Latex encasement by bondagewriter Latex encasement by bondagewriter
Once again, I decided to experiment with something new. I just can't seem to be able to work on one thing at a time, for better or worse.
Anyway, some lucky girl is wearing a latex catsuit, a latex straightjacket, extremely high heeled platform boots, a collar and a latex hood which covers her head completely, spare for her hair. By the way, you can tell she likes it because of the little heart after the "mmmph" ;P. I guess I constantly draw those hearts there to show it's consensual. After all, it's always best if both parts want it to happen, right?
When scouring dA for references, I noticed the shine that latex has, and I looked up some tutorials real quick to see how that was done. I hope I did well on that.
I tried to make the outlines clearer, and I think it improved the quality and visibility by just doing that. I gotta remember to do that in the future.
The one thing I'm not happy about are her legs. I still got work to do, but it's not the worst I've ever done.
Enjoy, and please comment and give contructive critique. I'll take all I can get to improve.
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Dani1202 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011
Nice to see you starting to draw, just some tips you might want to consider (mainly mistakes I used to make - and sometimes still make):
The pelvis should be much wider, keep one word in mind: hourglass. When drawing a female body, that's the most important shape you might need. Take a look at this photo, which handily showed up on the frontpage: [link] to see what I mean. The hips are almost as wide as the shoulders (well, not quite, but you get the idea).
The legs look a bit short as well, and also pretty straight, there should be some visible curves from the muscles. A good tip is to actually look at an anatomy chart that shows all the muscles. It helps understand why you draw the curves the way you do.

The head DOES seem a bit big, but that's mostly because the leg portion is too small. Compared to the shoulders, it looks rather okay, still a tad big, but that's not as tragic, some anime characters have even bigger heads.

And one last tip: try to think CURVES, rather than BLOCKS, most of your lines seem to be pretty straight, with sharp angles. The human body has a more fluid shape.

Just some tips so you can improve, I don't want to be rude, so sorry if it sounds like that!^^;
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bondagewriter Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I don't take it as ruse at all. I know I make a lot of mistakes, especially with female anatomy. Drawing guys is much easier for me, because we have a much more straight-forward and flat body (unless it's a fat guy, of course, but that would apply for women too).
I am in the process of just learning basic anatomy, and getting proportions right. I'm gonna work on muscles when I manage to get the head, torso, arms and legs to look proportionate to each other.
And I try to make some curves, and it seems I fail. But I will attempt to get better as time goes by. I'm working on another picture now, which will be uploaded when it's done and I have time and possibility to take a picture and upload it.

Thanks for all the tips. You're being a great help to me ^^ It would help me a lot if you would keep giving critique on artwork to come.
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Dani1202 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
Always happy to help in any way I can, eventhough I've still got a lot to learn myself.

And one final word of advice: Keep practicing, I'd love to see your art improve and grow! :)
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bondagewriter Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'd love to see it improve too. Thanks for the encouragement. I'll likely be taking a look in your gallery from time to time for inspiration :)
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lRlElAlDl Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work, you're gettig better!

THe latex mirror effect, looks nic,e maybe not the best ever done, but still nice; The heels look... *sorry to say* sloppy, though the lef tone looks better. One big problem i have is thatthe neck is as wide as thr hips, exempt from this it looks pretty good, keep working!
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bondagewriter Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It was a bit touch-and-go for a lot of this. The heels were supposed to be ballet boots with stilleto heels. All I know is that they are really point, so I tried making it like that.
And head and neck anatomy compared to the rest of the body is my greatest nightmare, it seems. I need to practice that more. Thanks for the feedback :)
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lRlElAlDl Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You are very welcome! Will keep comenting if you keep working
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bondagewriter Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :) I will do my best.
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lRlElAlDl Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Not a problem, my pleasure!
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Creative-Inversion Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
It's looking really good! :D Just keep up the practice ^^ She definitely looks like she's enjoying herself ;)
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